It is nice to see the Twilight is wearing a sweater vest and button down shirt, it matches the character to a T. Applejack and Rarity both have really good out outfits, Rarity being that typical clothing store representative, and applejack wearing the rolled up work shirt. Rainbow Dash I wearing a long sleeve mock turtle neck but I would imagine that some form of a sports jersey would have been better. Or maybe the "I woke in what I was wearing yesterday." type of clothing. Moving on we see that Flutter guy(Tehe) is wearing a long sleeve...something...its thin and long sleeved what else is there to say, his hair is long and his face is pale and has a look of awkward horror which would be expected if you were suddenly glumeped by a manly pinkie pie... Ah...Pinkie Pie. I'm certain this was not intended but due to the way the smoke is drawn every time I glace up I see him with a five'o clock shadow. He looks rather disturbing but now I’m being overly mean. After all the drawing is fantastic overall and the clothing decisions cannot really be judged because we only see them from on angle. The only outfits we get to see well are Rarity and Twilight's. So overall I would say that it is visually appealing, the originality is there but not shining. The technique is good; I've always been a fan of thelivingmahine02. The impact however is where points are lost. other then my initial surprise at seeing one of my favorite characters not only wearing one of my favorite outfits but also the outfit from csimadmax's New Season ( [link] ) But other than that the impact is quickly lost. The outfits are rather bland, Spike as a girl shows very few changes. But at the end of the day it’s competent and well made. Good job and keep it up
This is a combination of very good, and very not good.
The dynamics are PERFECT. We see the expressions, we know what the expressions were intended to convey, and they convey it! There is no awkwardness, and they are certainly lively and vibrant.
The background is pretty, and the colors are nice and practically pop.
There are some problems though. The clothing, while really great for Rarity and Twilight, suffer when it comes to the others. Pinkie's and Fluttershy's clothing are mostly generic, and it really doesn't convey their personalities well. This is the same with Spike, with Rainbow Dash and Apple Jack being somewhere in between all of this.
Finally, the physical differences are sorely lacking. The artist certainly attempted some differentiation, with different skin tones, and slight changes to the chins, but that is where the variety ends. The builds are either "skinny" or in Apple Jack's case, "slightly less skinny". The noses are all the same, the eyebrows are all the same, and little things like that are kind of generic, and really take away from the uniqueness of the mane cast.
All in all, this is a perfectly good picture in terms of vision, and the artist definitely has refined their art style a good deal, but it just lacks things that really makes the characters stand out as unique individuals.
Rd's and Applejohns Discussion. RD: Yo John U f***ed your sister last night! AJ: Why you- i oughta stranggle you, boy!! > RD: Come at me bro! DS(TS): Guys! GUYS!! Break it up!!
Moving on we see that Flutter guy(Tehe) is wearing a long sleeve...something...its thin and long sleeved what else is there to say, his hair is long and his face is pale and has a look of awkward horror which would be expected if you were suddenly glumeped by a manly pinkie pie...
Ah...Pinkie Pie. I'm certain this was not intended but due to the way the smoke is drawn every time I glace up I see him with a five'o clock shadow. He looks rather disturbing but now I’m being overly mean. After all the drawing is fantastic overall and the clothing decisions cannot really be judged because we only see them from on angle. The only outfits we get to see well are Rarity and Twilight's.
So overall I would say that it is visually appealing, the originality is there but not shining. The technique is good; I've always been a fan of thelivingmahine02. The impact however is where points are lost. other then my initial surprise at seeing one of my favorite characters not only wearing one of my favorite outfits but also the outfit from csimadmax's New Season ( [link] ) But other than that the impact is quickly lost. The outfits are rather bland, Spike as a girl shows very few changes. But at the end of the day it’s competent and well made. Good job and keep it up
The dynamics are PERFECT. We see the expressions, we know what the expressions were intended to convey, and they convey it! There is no awkwardness, and they are certainly lively and vibrant.
The background is pretty, and the colors are nice and practically pop.
There are some problems though. The clothing, while really great for Rarity and Twilight, suffer when it comes to the others. Pinkie's and Fluttershy's clothing are mostly generic, and it really doesn't convey their personalities well. This is the same with Spike, with Rainbow Dash and Apple Jack being somewhere in between all of this.
Finally, the physical differences are sorely lacking. The artist certainly attempted some differentiation, with different skin tones, and slight changes to the chins, but that is where the variety ends. The builds are either "skinny" or in Apple Jack's case, "slightly less skinny". The noses are all the same, the eyebrows are all the same, and little things like that are kind of generic, and really take away from the uniqueness of the mane cast.
All in all, this is a perfectly good picture in terms of vision, and the artist definitely has refined their art style a good deal, but it just lacks things that really makes the characters stand out as unique individuals.
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