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What Have I Done? by thelivingmachine02 What Have I Done? by thelivingmachine02
:iconmattpwnsall: "How about a picture like the scene from "Sisterhood Social" where Rarity finds Sweetie Belle's card and she's tearing up?"

Oh, woe is me!
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First off I want to say I think your definitely going places with your drawing. In drawing every day brings constant improvement. I am going to give you my honest opinion here. I dabble in drawing myself, but am no where near your level so take it for what its worth. I just grow tired of seeing everyone giving 5 stars for everything with out justification.

Over all this is a wonderfully clean piece. Your line work is excellent, and i really think you have managed to capture the emotion you wanted to in this piece. Now the devil is in the details over all, and besides a little variation in the hair which is nice and the highlights in the eyes, which are very nice, i find this to missing some more detail. I think some shadowing would do great for you.

Now perhaps this is more personal opinion or a stylistic choice on your part, but light and shadows are something that give depth to an image. And depth pulls you in.

Over all this is a lovely piece. Keep working hard at your art.
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:icon92captainwolf:
92CaptainWolf Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This picture made me really cry. I'm not kidding! 
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:iconhorrorhorseanimation:
HorrorHorseAnimation Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
She apparently made one ugly dress then...I'd wear it though, Rarity, even though I despise anything girly.
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:iconraizerninja:
RaizerNinja Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
AS CELESTIA AS MY WITNESS I WILL NEVER BE SISTERLESS AGAIN!!!!!!!!!
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:iconpinkieshyfim:
PinkieShyFIM Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooh! I just had a perfect idea! Could you draw the Mane Six when they are all in there mental states? (Humanised of course)
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:iconaloodonguy67:
Aloodonguy67 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Student Artist
The feels!!!!!
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:iconaloodonguy67:
Aloodonguy67 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Student Artist
The feels!!!!!!
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:iconstarlightshin123:
StarlightShin123 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
The original :iconraritysadplz:
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:iconpeppersunil:
peppersunil Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
Sorta looks like how Elinor Broke Merida's bow. Great Reference!
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:iconcandycanetiger:
Candycanetiger Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh sweetie belle
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:iconasim1996:
Asim1996 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013
how about twilight and shining armor fight in canterlot wedding part 1?
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:iconimadeponies:
ImadePonies Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
the feels man the feels.
*Sorry i had to do that*
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:iconmermaidlovertyler:
MermaidloverTyler Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
WOE IS MEEEEEEE!!
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:iconfoxygrandpa98:
FoxyGrandPa98 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
I have a pic of my girl friend who looks like and reminds me of Rarity and I was wondering if you wanna draw my girlfriend to look like this Rarity. I have a pic of my girl friend I can send you or upload to my page and u can save it and then draw my girl friend to look like Rarity. Can you do that for me please?
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:iconcutemute34:
cutemute34 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That was a great scene.
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:iconalbertkirkegarde:
AlbertKirkegarde Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012
"Oh sister, my sister... I never appreciated you, and now you're gone! Boohoohoohoo- AND SCENE!"
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:iconatom-smasher-errors:
Atom-Smasher-Errors Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
YOU KILLED SPIKE YOU SON OF A B****!
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:iconhellbeholder:
Hellbeholder Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh yeah, this scene was like "OMG rarity, your such a... *****************"
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:iconbananabreyer:
bananabreyer Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012
poor rarity...
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:iconari-uzumaki-elric:
Ari-Uzumaki-Elric Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012
That part made me cry too! I have a sister myself, and that episode is very touching to me
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DuplexFields Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The first time I saw the episode, I thought that scene was over-the-top sappy. Every time since then, I've teared up.

This is a great variation, matching the original in style and substance.
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:iconbraindawg1:
Braindawg1 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dose eyes
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:iconmhh3:
MHH3 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Professional Photographer
I still love how emotive this is!
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:iconkr4u55:
KR4U55 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"No one will save you now
We can only look away (away!)"
Sorry, the last line catched me.
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:iconmichelleleonhardt:
MichelleLeonhardt Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
LIKE DIS IF U CRIE EVERTIM
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:icontiffy2000:
tiffy2000 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
you have sold the cassle
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:iconcosmicafro:
CosmicAfro Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
What have you done!?

You made me HNNNNNNNG!!!
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:iconkamenkewl:
kamenkewl Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012
awwwwwwwww </3
man, you capture the look of the show so perfectly....
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:iconxeno-the-hedgehog:
Xeno-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I just want to see the entire show redone in this style. Even the scenes where certain things wouldn't translate well.
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:iconisoscelescube:
Isoscelescube Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I almost shed a tear at this point.
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:iconinternationaltck:
InternationalTCK Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:tears:
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:iconlemonbuttercup:
LemonButtercup Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
Flim and Flam, please? I mean...if that's okay with you.
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REV6Pilot Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
Pal, excellent job. It's very rare to see a believable expression in a cartoon character during those moments where they discover that they fucked up big time.
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:iconvarietychick:
VarietyChick Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You've captured her expression perfectly. I love it!
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:iconkishiforest:
KishiForest Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
That background music. I cry every time.
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:iconkprovido:
kprovido Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
So sad XD

great job! :D
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:iconkomatsuzaki-xingqi:
Komatsuzaki-Xingqi Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very well done. I'd critique if I was a member.
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:icondemonpanther:
DemonPanther Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
Love that! It was so emotionally sweet for her to realize how much she hurt her little sister when all she was trying to do was help!
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:iconsavannagrey:
savannagrey Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The hand over her mouth is a nice touch!
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:iconggunsailor:
Ggunsailor Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Student Writer
I have to admit, Rarity's growing on me quite a bit. And you draw her beautifully. :)
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:iconjazzynoona:
jazzynoona Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
OHHHHHHHH. WHAT, HAVE, I ,DONE!

-because when she says it, to me at least, it sounds kind of robot-y xD
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Hureno Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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:iconsiansaar:
Siansaar Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
perfection.
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:icontheadolescentking:
TheAdolescentKing Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
B'AAAAW
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:iconthe-derp-man24:
the-derp-man24 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
*title name*
my reaction: EVERYTHING :iconlookofdisprovelplz:
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:iconsgt-samson:
Sgt-Samson Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good god those eyes and expression.....:'(
Poor Rarity! :(
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:iconmattpwnsall:
Mattpwnsall Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Student Artist
LOVELY :iconiloveitmoreplz:

Great picture of that moment! :D :iconlawooplz:
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:iconrobbiemelrose:
RobbieMelrose Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Get ready Chris, because I'm gonna critique on your artwork!
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:icontruthsender:
TruthSender Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
This is wunderbar but I think hoof version is D`awwwwwier than this :P
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:iconrobokitty:
RoboKitty Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
:iconmanlytearsplz:
Manly tears were shed that day
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Sandwich-Anomaly Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what have you done?!? :icondrweirdplz::iconsaysplz:MAGIC!
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